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Comments by: Worstbrat
Comment Posted:December 29, 2012

"in and out of the campus" Try "on and off campus."

Comment Posted:December 29, 2012

1. "could not" Why use the simple past tense?
2. "come up" Why use the simple present tense?
3. "from the following aspects" Try "in the following ways."

Comment Posted:December 29, 2012

1. It's not necessary to preface one's opinions with "I feel."
2. veracity?". ... excuses.". <== Delete 2nd period